What do you think of my linkedin headline?

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I’m just graduating college and want to go into the non-profit sector where I only have volunteer experience.

“Global citizen dedicated and determined to raising cultural awareness”

Is that too general?

Answers and Views:

Answer by Fabiola
I like the “global citizen” part, but I’m not sure about “cultural awareness” it’s not clear for me maybe too general as you’re saying.

Maybe it’ll be a good idea to include in your headline something related to your previous experience. It doesn’t matter if it is only as a volunteer it will give a better idea about you, your interests and what you care about.

Good luck!