Designer Vampire: How do you write a kissing scene for a piece of writing?
I’m writing a book/story and I’ve just gone blank on how to write a kissing scene. It needs to be romantic and it’s the main characters first kiss.
Please could I have some help?
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Answer by Souga Cooper
Have them in a quiet place together, so as to create a real ambiance, a romantic mood.
Maybe some nature around them? Or maybe use the banality of a room or something to emphasize the beauty of the romance. One of them should softly whishper “I love you, Ruma”. Then, as the girl leans in, Ruma smacks her in the face with a wet fish.
Make sure to use lots of adjectives on how the opposite person looked, how they moved, where they were, if any one was watching, etc., and make it go really slow and last longAnswer by Neil
It seems to me that, since it is their first kiss, they don’t really know how to do it. Not really knowing how to write it would make it spontaneous and believable.
You could start with the romantic scene, and then write about them trying to figure out who starts, how they should start, who turns whose head which way, how they keep their noses out of the way of each other, do they close their eyes or keep them open, do they worry about bad breath, how long the kiss should last.
Really, just let your imagination run wild, ask yourself the questions I mentioned, ask a few more of your own, and have at it. You know the characters better than anyone else.
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